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Kia ora Theodora, I wonder how you can will improve your writing in term 4? What will you actually do? Maybe you could add a bit more into your slide and it will update the blog post. I like your photo. It advertises yourself positively online and that means you are being Cybersmart. from Mrs Torrie
Kia ora Theodora. My name is Teylah and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love the creative mind you have and used rainbow letters for your writing. Improving your writing would be a big help for your teacher in Term 4. I’m sure instead of only writing one word on each box you could have written at least 3 words down.
Kia ora Theodora S My name is Tawera and I attend mangapapa school in Gisborne. I like your goal to be better at writing. How could you improve your writing to make it better than before? Maybe you could practise your spelling or another method you could use ?
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Awesome Theo xx
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ReplyDeleteI wonder how you can will improve your writing in term 4? What will you actually do? Maybe you could add a bit more into your slide and it will update the blog post.
I like your photo. It advertises yourself positively online and that means you are being Cybersmart.
from Mrs Torrie
Kia ora Theodora. My name is Teylah and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. I love the creative mind you have and used rainbow letters for your writing. Improving your writing would be a big help for your teacher in Term 4. I’m sure instead of only writing one word on each box you could have written at least 3 words down.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Theodora S My name is Tawera and I attend mangapapa school in Gisborne. I like your goal to be better at writing. How could you improve your writing to make it better than before? Maybe you could practise your spelling or another method you could use ?
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