Friday 4 June 2021

Paradise




As I slowly walk into the snow white cruise ship I can smell the strong salt sea water. The smell of tropical coconuts drifted across my nose. The splashing sea water splashed onto my tiny little nose.

As the cruise ship drifted on the sparkling water I could see a tiny tropical Island. The tiny little waves drifted across the sparkling ocean as I past the giant mountain.

I can hear waves crashing down on the deep blue sea. Birds chirping on the emerald coconut trees and people jumping into the warm blue sea.

I can feel people crashing into me like two mountains. The warm blue sea splashing me like tiny ladybugs attacking me.

I can taste the salt sea water splashing me in my mouth. The swaying trees high in the mountains. The fresh air swaying in my mouth.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Theodora,
    I'm Irelyn from ST marys school gisborne.
    I think you are very good at describing the colour and look of an object
    This riminds me of my tropical Island wrighting
    did you like wright this?

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